I really like this piece. I love the word shy and the way you manipulated it to fit its meaning. Also i dig the word "Apathetic" and how you used another word to spell it out. "Smart" is also well done with the "A+" in the middle of it. The Word "Creative" is very creative and is well delivered. However maybe some less negative space in top left would make it better. You can possibly add more words or make emotional bigger and placing it in a different spot for visual flow and balance. Besides those things this is fantastic.
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ReplyDeleteI really like this piece. I love the word shy and the way you manipulated it to fit its meaning. Also i dig the word "Apathetic" and how you used another word to spell it out. "Smart" is also well done with the "A+" in the middle of it. The Word "Creative" is very creative and is well delivered. However maybe some less negative space in top left would make it better. You can possibly add more words or make emotional bigger and placing it in a different spot for visual flow and balance. Besides those things this is fantastic.
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