I really like this but i think there is some empty space that should be filled with some thing in the bottom right to make this piece more balanced. but good job
I really like how you used color in this to emphasize each of the personality traits you put down. The fact that 'Creative' is the word that intersects with the 'E' of 'Serious' I thought was especially well done.
My suggestion to improve the piece would be to add a little more visual weight to the bottom-right corner. It seems like there's too much negative space and the artwork is much heavier in the upper-left than anywhere else.
I really like this but i think there is some empty space that should be filled with some thing in the bottom right to make this piece more balanced. but good job
ReplyDeletethats what i thought too! :[
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used color in this to emphasize each of the personality traits you put down. The fact that 'Creative' is the word that intersects with the 'E' of 'Serious' I thought was especially well done.
ReplyDeleteMy suggestion to improve the piece would be to add a little more visual weight to the bottom-right corner. It seems like there's too much negative space and the artwork is much heavier in the upper-left than anywhere else.